5/9/14 – Shay Savage – Worth – 2.5 stars
Quote Love: “In this bed, I am always Lucius to you.”
What I liked: It had some hot scenes in it for sure.
What could have been better: You can’t use words like subligarium and then have the main character refer to his wiener as a “cock”. I mean manhood, phallus, those would have been perfectly acceptable old timey words! It made things disjointed to have him use a term like “cock-out”… I need consistency. You either go all the way back in Roman times, or set it there and have the language be all modern… but the in between I couldn’t get with. It made the cocky things that the main character said at times just seem so out of place.